First thing is first, if you are going to put in subtle text dialogue, make sure the text is a different color than what it'll be overlayed upon for readability sake. Or if you have a ton of colors on it, then you could get creative and have the outline of the subtitles itself shift
The drawing itself is decent.
Voices could probably be done better, but text to speech is passable for independent animation.
Overall, as a short, it respects our time in terms of what the joke was while also having solid character drawings.
Has the appeal of a tic toc video. Short. To the point, and possibly forgotten about by all but a few a few months later.
Better voices and subtle title visual discipline and you'll get an extra star or two.